Ever wonder why it takes the government so many words to say...maybe not so much? 

So did a visitor to the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau's (CFBP) blog.  The blog features someone (something?) called The Explainer who answers consumer questions and this time the question was about the process of devising new and supposedly simpler mortgage disclosures.  The visitor, using the name "Interested" referenced a recent notice of proposed rulemaking published by CFBP regarding the disclosures.  The notice was 1,099 pages long.  "Why," Interested asked, "does it take so many pages to create something that's supposed to be easy to use and understand?"

Yeah, why?  In case you have wondered this yourself, here is the explanation.  For the record, it runs exactly 900 words.  Maybe we should put The Explainer in charge of all government documents.  

Dear Interested,

This is a great question, one you're not alone in asking - 1,099 is a lot of pages, as those of us who were involved in writing them can attest.

Let's start with some background. Currently, two federal laws - the Truth in Lending Act (TILA) and the Real Estate Settlement Procedures Act (RESPA) - mandate that consumers receive disclosures of certain information about mortgage loans. The Dodd-Frank Act required the CFPB to propose a rule to combine the TILA and RESPA disclosures.

If you want to see the new combined disclosures, combine and simplify existing mortgage disclosures check them out here. If you want to see what the proposal means for you, we've provided summaries, one on what it would mean for consumers and one with more technical detail.

You said "propose a rule to combine the disclosures" instead of just "propose combined disclosures." Why?
It's an important distinction. The rule explains how we would expect industry to use the disclosures: when to issue them, how they apply to different loans, what various terms mean, etc.

And that proposed rule is 1,099 pages?
Actually, no. We are not proposing 1,099 pages of new regulations. That page count is for the notice of the proposed rule, not the rule. Like notices of proposed rulemaking issued by other agencies (particularly the Federal Reserve Board), our proposal consists of three basic parts: (1) the preamble explaining the proposal; (2) the text of the proposed regulations; and (3) guidance on how to comply with those regulations.

In terms of pages, the new regulations are only a small part. Most of the pages explain what we are doing and why we are doing it. As required by law, we analyze the costs and benefits of the proposal for consumers and industry. We also provide thorough guidance on how to comply including samples of completed forms, which the industry requested during our outreach and Small Business Review Panel process. Because of the variability of mortgage loan and real estate transactions, industry wanted specific guidance for many different potential scenarios. This added to the page count.

Here's how the notice breaks down:

The preamble is long.
It is. The preamble provides context for the proposed forms and regulatory changes. The mortgage market is big, and mortgage disclosure regulation has 43 years of history. Also, before writing the rule, we spent a lot of time talking to industry and consumers and analyzing costs and benefits. That's a lot of context, and that means a long preamble.

Why bother with all this context?
First, some of it is required by law. Second, we believe that part of our commitment to open government is providing more rather than less information about our work. Finally, we want your comments to help us understand the market better, and providing context can lead to more informative comments. Explaining what we considered in writing the proposal makes it easier to craft specific responses or to draw our attention to something you think we've missed. Comments that provide new insight or information can be the ones that have the greatest impact on what we do next.

That leaves 415 pages. Only part of that is new rules, though. What else is left?
The technical and conforming amendments make sure the new rules don't conflict with existing rules, that they make the right cross-references, etc. This actually accounts for more than half of the proposed regulatory language.

The proposed guidance explains what certain regulatory language means in context. For example, the phrase "within three business days" appears a lot in this notice, as in: a creditor must deliver the loan estimate disclosure "within three business days" of application. But what counts as a business day? If a bank is closed the Friday before an Independence Day that falls on Saturday, does that Friday count as a business day? (Answer for purposes of delivery of this disclosure: yes.) Providing guidance that clarifies issues like these can save time, energy, and costs for both industry and regulators.

And the signature gets its own page?
Yes. We don't expect a lot of comments on that page.

So where can I comment on this notice of proposed rulemaking?
First, we hope you'll take a look at the Know Before You Owe project that helped us develop the proposed disclosures. Then, review the rule and submit your comments at Regulations.gov.